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i think it was just that one day -- i cannot remember the weather
it was a day i would never forget -- it was probably sunshine and hot

it was the day, when i lost my faith in you -- it was summer after all
when my heart was destroyed, i sat there and heard -- mid summer, to be precise

that, in my time of agony, my time of destruction -- the winter was yet to come
you were too busy, to answer my call, too much to do -- leaves about to fall

i stood alone again, not sure of what to do -- there was chance of rain
and my heart broke...slowly as I hung up the call -- clouds dark

if only I knew the troubles to come - tear drops started like rain
A poem about loss and the weather - we all chat about weather a lot "It's Rain today", or "It's Soooo Hot". It is unfortunate this does not extend to everything in life.
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is written in a very unique style.
I've never seen anything like it!
Keep up the good work!
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wdnest Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks - I have been experimenting with this style of poetry for a short while. Glad you liked it - I find it easy to write and express in this fashion.
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It really is.
It's like you're speaking with two different minds.
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wdnest Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks - similar idea here are on these poems - [link] [link]
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thanks
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.
Those are really touching and inspirational.
Have you posted these on 'Poems Speak For Us'?
I'm a member of the group, I work in the group, and I would love to have these accepted into the group.
They really say a lot.

And if you wish, there's a poem that I wrote that has spoken to a lot of people.
If you can, please check it out: [link]

I really do hope you can share those poems, you have a unique talent!
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wdnest Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks for your compliments. I have submitted to the group. One was already in there. Feel free to checkout my website on [link] or facebook on [link].

Thanks
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InvaderZIB13 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Sorry, but I don't have a Facebook account.
But thank you for the invite!
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