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the girl huddled next to her school desk, covering her work quickly
uses the eraser three times, not getting it down, not understanding

--he will be there tonight -- I know you don't want to hear

write a story about menace she thought -- her task not healthy
it was hard to describe her life, her best friend not knowing

-- the fear will make you sick -- Quick turn away, leave the little girl alone

her mum not understanding, the sister she must protect, silent
hiding, waiting, running away, she huddled closer to her pen

-- trapped with him, his face will distort your memories -- Am I making you uncomfortable?

erasing more and more lines, it was the fear that got to her
but she must be strong, keep him away, while writing slowly about nothing

-- there is no escape, even if you try -- You cannot hear this, you say

and with the pen, she stopped, emotionless -- her pen down, shoulders hunched
she had nothing to write about, but rainbows and dancing in the sun

-- no one will believe you, to run you will just be returned - Well just stop reading

the menace had been that good, that precise
that even a little girl felt trapped -- when writing alone

he scared her to a point where it was easier to forget
          and erase the page

the menace that is at every turn,

and leaves her chasing butterflies, in the fields
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It made me sick to write.

Written for [link] Theme Imminent Menace Writing Tournament by :iconwriters--club:

This poem is expressing the trap and the fear - society not helping her, so she must face it alone.

After writing this poem - I shook my head in disgust at what I had to go through, in just writing as a child

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~ShadowandCeleste Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You captured the feeling perfectly. Well done
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~Daughter-Of-Script Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well done. Well done indeed.
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~InvaderZIB13 Feb 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a very interesting peice.
It's an intriguing form, in its own way.
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