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How to Write the Perfect Poem.

Through her misty tears
She wrote about writing
She back spaced
Her smile became a frown
For she could not express
How simple it was
To get lost in
Explaining
How a simple poem
Made her cry
The expression
The heartache
The loss
The terror
How could you explain that
How could you say
What it was like to
Cry, as you expressed
What you were trying to say
Trying to tell her

That little girl
That is me

How to love.
Poetry

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Ask-SindreAndSvetki Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
((This invokes so much emotion! I love that ending. At first I expected something totally different.))
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MindOfInsanity Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I like the plottwist in the end. (:
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HeartyStar Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lovely words, you provoke the very emotions you write. ^//^
Keep up the great work dear
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FunnelVortex Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The ending was awesome!
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SunsetNightshade Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013   Traditional Artist
wow. You see, I love poetry and I frequently read some, but this is defenitely one of the best poems I have read in yaers. Wonderful work. love :)
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wdnest Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Professional Writer
Thanks.
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DarkLondonDreams Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gorgeous. I can really relate to this poem.
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Katashi-Okenuth Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful.
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IvyusPain Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
so how do you Write the Perfect Poem?
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wdnest Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012  Professional Writer
You write solely for yourself. Then for that moment, it is the perfect poem.
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