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The Tear

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It drifts down
Her cheek
Slowly
Her hopes
Her dreams
Sandcastles
In her soul
Torn
She catches it
In her hand
And looks slowly
Just one more time
Before it
Evaporates in
The Sun.
Loss and tears

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philosophie-c's avatar
I would space the words differently but other than that I love this piece :)
Especially the image of something to important to you evaporating in the sun...
very sad and beautiful